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I Want A Party by ~MishMash25:iconMishMash25:

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V1
Inside but still waiting
I look around and you don't look back
Trying to contribute
But it's just not up to scratch
Somehow never happens
But I don't want to harrass
Always craving for it
But no depth is coming back

CH
I want a party
I want a party

V2
Vision is distorted
Fresh ideas need to mix with mine
Stale air will circle
But it rots with passing time
Constantly am wanting
Quality exposure sublime
Reignite the talking
And don't let the topic stray
Latch on
Please stay

CH
I want a party
I want a party

Mid
Absorb and confide
Nobody denied
Gut any issue
Paranoia is soothed
Relieve the suppressed
Perceptions adressed
And I'm still obsessed
I'm still obsessed

CH
I want a party
I want a party
I want a party
©2008 ~MishMash25
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This is the second song I've finished writing. At least, I think it's finished. My problem is that I take so long to write lyrics, they end up being about two or three related but different things. Ahwell.

So yes, my second song. It's probably better than my first one (Carbon) musically, as Carbon had some crazy scale issues i think. This one's simpler.

Full of metaphors and such. And a quote from a friend too. I wonder how people will perceive this and so on. Please note, not an 'It's My Party And I'll Cry If I Want To' type of thing.
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~captaincabbage:iconcaptaincabbage: Apr 18, 2008, 5:40:20 AM
well Have a freakin' cry!! :crying:

I want a party too, but I don't have enough friend! also I hate parties ;P

--
When I'm weak, I draw strength from you,
and when you're sad I know how to change your mood.
When I'm down you breath life over me,
Although we're miles apart we are each other's destiny.
=masked-racoon:iconmasked-racoon: Apr 18, 2008, 6:12:29 AM
:sing: i wanna a wedding cake:sing:
XD

--
there are so many lies in the world today
and someone's got to tell them.....
~jackflint:iconjackflint: Apr 20, 2008, 3:45:54 AM
YAY

liked the line 'gut an issue' thought that was really effective, its a bummer alfastralfid and so on cant read this, hopefully you'll get to play it to them one day

--
Every time she sneezes I believe it's love
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